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Query letter generator: build your letter, check it, send it

If you searched for a query letter generator, this one builds the letter around your own words and doesn't write the pitch. You write a hook, a pitch of around 200 words and a short bio. The tool adds the greeting, the line with your title and word count, and a closing, then counts every part and flags fifteen common faults.

Our worked letter below runs 321 words: a 36-word hook, a 178-word pitch, a 34-word bio and 73 words of greeting, reason, housekeeping and close. It can't judge your story or read an agent's rules for you.

Housekeeping
The hook
The pitch
About you
The letter
Length
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Words in the letter
0
Things to fix
HookAim for 25 to 600
PitchAim for 150 to 2500
BioAim for 20 to 750
Checks
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How to use the query letter builder

Step 01
Read the agent's own submission page first

It overrides anything here.

Step 02
Fill in the housekeeping

the agent's name, your title, word count, genre and two recent comparable books.

Step 03
Add one sentence on why this agent, or leave it blank rather than write a generic line.
Step 04
Write the hook (who wants what, and what stands in the way), then the pitch: the setup, the turn and the cost of failure.
Step 05
Add a bio of publications and relevant expertise

"No publications yet" is a complete answer.

Step 06
Read the preview and the check notes, fix what's flagged, then press Copy the letter. Nothing is saved, so copy before you leave. Add your name and contact details by hand.
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A query letter generator that does not write your pitch: what it does instead

The letter runs in this order: "Dear" and the agent's name; your reason, if you gave one; your hook; your pitch; a housekeeping line ("TITLE IN CAPITALS is an 84,000-word genre that will find its readers among those who finished your comps"); your bio; a short closing that offers more material on request; and "Sincerely," with name and contact placeholders. Blank boxes are skipped, bracketed placeholders show what's missing, and your hook, pitch and bio are used exactly as typed.

Counters sit beside each box (hook 25 to 60, pitch 150 to 250, bio 20 to 75), with a total and a count of things to fix. Words are counted as in our word and page count tool.

The fifteen checks fire on: no comps; a hook outside 25 to 60 words; a pitch outside 150 to 250; a bio over 75; a whole letter over 500; a hook that opens with a rhetorical question; "fiction novel"; an exclamation mark; a bio that explains when you started writing; a universal readership claim; words in full capitals outside the title; "my first novel"; a manuscript over 130,000 words; a novel under 50,000; and no agent name.

It never reads for meaning. A clean result means no rule on a short list fired, and the other half, whether the pitch makes someone want chapter one, is yours.

The short version
A clean result means no rule on a short list fired, and the other half, whether the pitch makes someone want chapter one, is yours.
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What each part of the letter is for

Jane Friedman's guide to query letters names the same ingredients, with personalization optional.

Agent and reason

Name the person. Add a reason only if it's specific to this agent.

Hook

One or two sentences. Who wants what, and what stands in the way of getting it.

Pitch

Setup, turn, cost of failure.

Housekeeping and comps

Title, word count, genre and two recent comps. Two is enough, says Friedman.

Bio

Publications and relevant expertise only. With no credits, invent none and don't apologize.

Close

A short thank-you and an offer of the manuscript.

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Worked example: one letter, counted

Every count here came from the tool's own code. The book, the agent and both comps are invented. The inputs: agent Ms. Okonjo; title The Winter Ledger; 84,000 words; historical novel; comps The Salt Ledger and Winter at Fort Reliance; reason "your list includes several historical novels set in the American West."

The hook (36 words): "In 1893 a schoolteacher with a borrowed name reaches a Colorado mining town in the dead of winter, hoping to disappear. A child hands her a stolen ledger page, and staying hidden stops being an option."

The pitch (178 words) opens: "Nell Hartigan arrives in Silverton with a trunk, a map to a claim that may not exist, and a name that belongs to a dead woman. The town needs a teacher more than it needs another stranger, and it makes sure she knows which one it thinks she is."

The bio (34 words): "I teach high school history in Durango, Colorado, and I have spent eleven summers as a volunteer archivist at the San Juan County Historical Society. My short fiction has appeared in Western Literary Review."

PartWordsBand
Hook3625 to 60
Pitch178150 to 250
Bio3420 to 75
Everything else (greeting, reason, housekeeping, close, sign-off)73n/a
Whole letter321flag above 500

That's 36 + 178 + 34 + 73 = 321, and the tool shows 0 things to fix. The housekeeping line it builds reads: "THE WINTER LEDGER is an 84,000-word historical novel that will find its readers among those who finished The Salt Ledger and Winter at Fort Reliance."

A weak letter shows the other side. A hook of "What if a teacher found a secret?" (7 words), a pitch of "A teacher finds a secret. Everyone will love it!" (9 words), a bio of "I have always loved writing." (5 words), no agent and no comps gives 8 things to fix: no comps, a short hook, a short pitch, a rhetorical question, an exclamation mark, an origin-story bio, a universal readership claim and no agent name. The whole letter is 58 words.

A clean score doesn't make a letter good. It means none of the listed faults is in it.

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How long should a query letter be? The published ranges

Advice on length varies, so here are the ranges we read, as of 2026.

SourceWhole letterStory partBio part
Jane Friedmanabout 200 to 450 words, and brevity is advised150 to 300 wordsusually 50 to 100
Writer's Digestone page, 300 to 500 words, three to five paragraphsthe second paragraphthe closing paragraph
This toolflags above 500 wordsflags outside 150 to 250flags above 75

Writer's Digest says one page. The range runs from about 200 to 500 words, and 250 to 400 is a comfortable target. The tool flags at 500. A letter at the top of every band (60, 250 and 75 words) plus our sample's 73 other words comes to 458, under the flag. An agent's own page overrides all of this.

Book length matters too. Friedman calls 80,000 words standard for a debut novel, 120,000 and up a challenge, and 50,000 the usual minimum. The tool flags over 130,000 and, for a novel, under 50,000.

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What to send with the letter

From Andrea Brown Literary Agency's submission guidelines. Don't generalize from one agency.

Fiction

For novels, Andrea Brown Literary Agency asks for the first 10 pages of text. For a picture book it asks for the full text manuscript.

Nonfiction

The same agency asks for a proposal and one to three sample chapters. Agents sell nonfiction on a proposal, so this letter is a cover note. Our post on how to write a nonfiction book proposal covers the proposal itself.

One agent or many

That agency asks you not to query several of its agents at once. Friedman suggests rounds of 5 to 10. The agent's page wins.

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The ending: what the pitch should and should not give away

Our house line is simple. The query should give an agent enough to judge the book, including the stakes: what the character stands to lose. The full ending belongs in the synopsis, unless an agent's guidelines say otherwise.

Three documents, three jobs. The query makes an agent want to read. The synopsis tells the whole plot, ending included. The blurb is retail copy for readers. Some agents want an ending in the query, so follow the page. Our posts on how to write a book synopsis and crafting a compelling synopsis go further.

The short version
Some agents want an ending in the query, so follow the page.
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Common query letter mistakes

Rhetorical question openings

"What if a teacher found a secret?" is a common opening.

"Fiction novel" or "my first novel"

Both read as inexperience.

An origin-story bio

When you started writing is not a credential.

"Dear Agent"

Name the person, and check the name and genre for mail-merge slips.

Old or enormous comps

Use recent, real books close to yours.

Claiming everyone will like it

An agent can't position a book for everyone.

Too long

The tool flags over 500 words.

Trusting the score

The checks catch mechanical faults, not weak stories.

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Tips by situation

First novel with no credits

Keep the bio to expertise you really have. One true line about your work or research beats an invented credential, and "No publications yet" is a complete answer.

Nonfiction and memoir

Agents sell nonfiction on a proposal, so the letter is a cover note. The tool's closing line offers more material on request; change it by hand to offer the proposal.

Children's and picture books

Check the agency page first. The tool's manuscript-length flags are written for novels, so ignore them for a picture book.

Small press or no agent

Our house reads every submission, charges no reading fee and replies in writing, so you can submit your manuscript.

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Related guides on the Author Resources hub

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When a letter needs a second pair of eyes

Agents often decide on the first pages, so a developmental read before you query shows whether your opening works. We read a sample before quoting, and a free quote comes inside 24 hours.

Frequently asked questions

Questions we get asked

Is this a query letter generator?

No. It doesn't write your pitch. It builds the letter around the hook, pitch and bio you write, adds the housekeeping line and closing, and flags common faults.

How do you write a query letter?

Open with the agent's name and a specific reason. Give a hook and a pitch of about 150 to 300 words, then title, word count, genre, two recent comps and a short bio, all on one page. Our guide to finding a literary agent covers the whole process.

How long should a query letter be?

One page. Published advice runs from about 200 to 500 words, and 250 to 400 is a comfortable target. Check the agent's page, because it overrides any general figure.

How long does it take a literary agent to respond to a query?

From days to never. Our guide says three months without a reply is normal, and many agencies say silence after a set period means no.

What are the odds of finding a literary agent?

Low and uneven. The commonly quoted figure is fifty to a hundred queries per manuscript, which isn't a verdict on quality.

How many comparable books do I need, and how recent?

Two is enough, according to Friedman. She says within a few years is best; Writer's Digest says two years, and the tool's label says five.

Is a query letter the same as a synopsis or a blurb?

No. The query is the pitch that gets an agent to read. A synopsis tells the whole plot, ending included, and a blurb is retail copy. See the section on the ending above.

Is this the same as a query letter at work?

No. "Query letter to employee" means a workplace document. This tool is for pitching a book to a literary agent.

Does the tool save or send my letter?

No. It runs in your browser and stores nothing, so copy the letter before you reload. The code makes no network requests.

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